Floating.
Spinning through space.
Stars pass by my vision as I tumble.
The broken tether streaming behind.
Breathing.
In. Out.
Calm.
In. Out.
Relaxed.
In. Out.
Preserve the air.
Tumbling.
Silence.
Breathing.
A beeping sound.
My vision tunnels,
the world goes dark.
Laith's Ramblings 
Enjoyed this sci-fi take on the prompt. The image of tumbling is the most terrifying aspect. Nicely done.
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I like your take on the prompt very much. Surreal and delicious!
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This reminds me of Gravity. That would be so scary.
I can see that. Wasn’t my intention but this soon after the movie I get it.
I like the repetition of the “in” and “out”–it adds to the ‘sound’ of the piece.
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it.
Nice take on the prompt…..loved this:)
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I like the effect of silence you’ve created, so that the sounds we do hear are crystal-clear.
Thanks! That was what I was shooting for.
Nice. Just what I imagined for George Cloony’s character in Gravity.
Thanks! As I mentioned to snapsandbits that wasn’t specifically my intention but it does fit the piece.
The last “noise” the soul makes. and to think that we breath throughout our lives, and the only time the breaths are that clear, is before death, may b
Before death or when danger to life is high, yes,
“My vision tunnels,” such a great phrase.
Thanks! I thought it worked well.
I think those words are really relaxing.
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I can’t imagine being that calm in that situation. But they say people relax into death. You’ve created an image here that will haunt me!
Thanks. But what was the beeping 😉
This was really mysterious
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This is how I want to go. 🙂
this reminded me too of Gravity. Beautifully done!
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I like it, it reminds me of that song . . .
Which one?
Lol I may have mentioned this before in relation to your work — Ground Control to Major Tom (or is it called Space Oddity?)
That’s the song i figured 🙂